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The Stars Will Aid In Her Escape

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I wanted to give this comic thing a shot. However I made a big mistake. About halfway through I realized that Luna would really be Nightmare Moon at this point in time. Also it's an old joke that everyone and their mother has made. Stop judging me. That's my job.

Edit* Just saw that I forgot her little shoes. Whoops.
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

This is so cute and I love the way Lunas body was drawn. I find her body language to adequately convey her emotional stand point and her facial expressions are great as well.
the colors are great and the concept of Luna enjoying her self when she is first banished mad me laugh. I hope to see a lot more of her from you as she is a great character that doesn't really get a lot of time but still carries a lot of potential for character creation.

Only thing I would of done differently is made her hair more smooth and natural instead of the kind of blocky jagged lines as well as the white out line over top of her. Also, her front legs look a little off in the first two shots, inconsistent and disproportional. Still looks great of course and over all, I love it. I really had to try to find things wrong with it in order to be of any help at all. ( which I'm sure I wasn't.)

Good job!