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The Stars Will Aid In Her Escape by I-am-knot The Stars Will Aid In Her Escape by I-am-knot
I wanted to give this comic thing a shot. However I made a big mistake. About halfway through I realized that Luna would really be Nightmare Moon at this point in time. Also it's an old joke that everyone and their mother has made. Stop judging me. That's my job.

Edit* Just saw that I forgot her little shoes. Whoops.
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This is so cute and I love the way Lunas body was drawn. I find her body language to adequately convey her emotional stand point and her facial expressions are great as well.
the colors are great and the concept of Luna enjoying her self when she is first banished mad me laugh. I hope to see a lot more of her from you as she is a great character that doesn't really get a lot of time but still carries a lot of potential for character creation.

Only thing I would of done differently is made her hair more smooth and natural instead of the kind of blocky jagged lines as well as the white out line over top of her. Also, her front legs look a little off in the first two shots, inconsistent and disproportional. Still looks great of course and over all, I love it. I really had to try to find things wrong with it in order to be of any help at all. ( which I'm sure I wasn't.)

Good job!
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:iconmalis22:
malis22 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015
well  technically time is much faster in space so she could have been up there for a month in her time
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:iconi-am-knot:
I-am-knot Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Though the difference between the moon and earth isn't all that big.
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:iconmalis22:
malis22 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015
true 
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:iconbrowncricket:
browncricket Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor Luna...wait a minute, what would she eat?
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:iconmalis22:
malis22 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015
moon cheese
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:iconi-am-knot:
I-am-knot Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Popcorn!
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:iconfluttershylover20:
fluttershylover20 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015
LOL.
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:iconbrowncricket:
browncricket Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww poor Luna :(
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Turtledove101 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  Student Artist
This is me every time I wait in the car when my mom said she is just "going to get milk", but comes back with 20 things and she forgets the milk. =-=
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:iconi-am-knot:
I-am-knot Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You get sent to the moon everytime you are in your car?
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:icondavidtechlife:
Davidtechlife Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2015
Moon pie perhaps :D (Big Grin) 
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:iconturtledove101:
Turtledove101 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Student Artist
My mum wants to though
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:iconsnapcentino:
SnapCentino Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Professional Writer
Time to mount a space mission.
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:iconmagicdust13:
MagicDust13 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014  Student General Artist
cute
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:iconluckydrago17:
luckydrago17 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014
she should have brought a gameboy
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:iconpokemonlegend999:
pokemonlegend999 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Did you request a critique for this? Because it shows Luna plays Lemmings when I click on it.
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:iconflickerphoenix:
Flickerphoenix Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The stars will aid her... eventually.
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:iconi-am-knot:
I-am-knot Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Damn stars, always late!
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:iconflickerphoenix:
Flickerphoenix Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, you never know. They might have better things to do than free celestial beings. Maybe make a sandwich or something.
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:iconeeveeworlds:
Eeveeworlds Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Oh poor little Luna.... :(
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:iconnikana-atsu:
Nikana-Atsu Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Student Artist
I just realized, ponies CAN LIVE on the moon!
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:iconcommisarjhon:
CommisarJhon Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
*OBJECTION!* Ponies cant live on moon. BUT ONLY ALICORN CAN! Proove that ponies can live on moon!
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:iconpersona22:
Persona22 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014
*HOLD IT!* is Equestria Earth?
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:iconcommisarjhon:
CommisarJhon Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014
Its country comrade, its country.
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:iconpersona22:
Persona22 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014
What is that supposed to mean? Are you saying that Equestria is located in Earth?
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:iconcommisarjhon:
CommisarJhon Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014
First yes, Equestria is located in earth and second Equestira is Country.
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:iconpersona22:
Persona22 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014
Can you prove this conclusion?
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:iconcommisarjhon:
CommisarJhon Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014
Yes i can. First one is wheres Griffin Kingdom? This may explain reason why it may be kingdom. >:3
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Nikana-Atsu Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Student Artist
uhhhh ._.
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:iconcommisarjhon:
CommisarJhon Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
... Thats your edvidence? Im kinda confused... But okay. *eats mac & cheese*
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:iconnikana-atsu:
Nikana-Atsu Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Student Artist
*runs away* 
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:iconopalshade:
OpalShade Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey, do you mind if I use the first frame for a small collage I am working on? Giving credits ofc!
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CommisarJhon Featured By Owner Edited Jun 12, 2014
:3
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:iconi-am-knot:
I-am-knot Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If you give me cred it's no problem.
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:iconopalshade:
OpalShade Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! I'll give the link as soon as I recieved the permissions for every piece I used
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Zoawan1 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
i like this style much better :)
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:iconzem-the-maniac:
Zem-the-Maniac Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
Second panel should be a wallpaper.
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:iconi-am-knot:
I-am-knot Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have some wallpaper plans for this one. But not the second panel.
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:iconthegeneraless:
TheGeneraless Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Professional General Artist
Beautiful! I love the style you used--and the comic itself is hilarious! XD
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:iconnocara:
nocara Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
aww poor thing. Love the pose in the last pannel
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:iconfacilierfan93:
FacilierFan93 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
Good comic^^ One problem: She was trapped In the moon, not on it
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:iconstar-von-alicorn:
Star-Von-Alicorn Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Same thing! Imhappy 

Mother of god Fuck you bye 
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:iconmlpegasis4898:
MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh!!! Poor Luna!!! She looks so adorable on the last panel!!! :love:
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d3skinner Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

Does anyone not remember that she gets banished "in the moon" and not on it?

She becomes the moon. Spiritually.

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:iconfist-of-doom:
Fist-of-doom Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm sure some got the connection.
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Kingpin4682 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013
luna is alternate pinkie in first panel
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HyperactiveChaosgirl Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ha ha ha, the last panel's funniest, great job with this^^
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ShoryuKanosoto Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
and so... Luna did the silly filly for 1000 years!
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:iconkopaleo:
KopaLeo Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I expected sadness at the second panel, and total depression/depletion at the third panel.
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Icelord2314 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Bouncy bouncy bounce:bouncyhai: 
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