I smiled at the pepperpot eye comment. That was the first thing I came up with design-wise so I grew fond of it. Maybe it's not the best looking or most practical. But it does set her apart from her sister. Thank you for the kind words.
personally I feel like her hooves and legs could be a bit thicker/stronger looking. They almost just look like poles to me :/. Everything else is nice though. I like the stars in the mane as well, I think you should keep them.
I'm sorry I can't take that challenge. I'll have to think aver the title some more. It is always the hardest part of any piece.
I do like the sound of Dominion however. It sounds powerful. I'll have to check up the exact definition. Ideas I have had so far is making it into a Sovereign State, a Unitary State or an Autocracy. But they, as words, don't pack the same punch as Dominion. To be sure.
Thank you for the comment and suggestion. I welcome it.