This is memorable, and big-company illustration quality. Looks like a final project of a class. Dunno if I'm accurate. However. With this. One thinks you can introduce yourself to a new threshold of confidence. With more like this, I'm sure you'd reach a fine job in games or film or SOMEthing if that's what you yearn for. Dunno how old you are. With the structure you used to create this, you could go on forever and you'd have my confidence. I say this to you and not to every artist I meet because there is an intense level of fearlessness in this what with all of the subtleties, which make the big difference. It's clear that you understand that the little things are what make the big difference, and God, if you believe in God, is clearly in this.
I admire that her eyes are a little bit sullen instead of quintissentially erect. Makes this seem more real and human, since magic folk could have reason to be less pleasing on the eyes than somebody in the more directly-physical arts; I mean.. martial arts. You get it.
You have a structure now.
Ratings are relative with whether this piece 'works.' /wave.