I actually prefer the simplicity of the inspiration piece.
Girl: Do u even like me?
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
I say experiment more. You never know, you might eventually find a style that takes your fancy.
I like how you put realism into Discord's design here. It makes him look like something you'd see in an oriental drawing from days of old, and that adds an extra layer of awesomeness to this piece. Well done, friend. :3
But then! I read your lovely and kind comment. And my mind went "Ahh this is a good way to wake up.
It's sweet that even though he's this huge dragon thing and could easily kill Fluttershy right now, he's still choosing to just hang out with her and be friends. thanks for sharing.